Here's how my second scene of "Saturday" is currently looking. I sent my work off to a connection I have over at Dreamworks who very kindly sent me a great email back telling me what he thought about it and how I could improve it and really push the poses and the character. Anyway, based of some of what I received back, this is what I have:
More work on the scene:
Blocking is almost complete on this scene now. Tomorrow I should have it complete!